Beginnings

Our openings must be COMPELLING, be it a novel, a short story or an article. Some suggestions:begin

  •  Never begin at the beginning.
  •  Start with action.  Look for the verb ‘to be’ in your opening paragraph.  It could be an indicator of a slow start.
  •  Your opening is your contract with your reader
  •  The proper time to work on your opening is when you’re finished with your novel, article, etc.  You don’t know the opening until you have written the end.
  •  The purpose of the first sentence is to get the reader to read the second sentence.  The purpose of the second sentence is to….etc.
  •  Be careful not to start with a volcano.  It’s a hard act to follow.            Rather opt for a REVEALING  opening, that promises something worthwhile.
  •  Get the five ‘Ws’ in as quick as you can — Who, What, Where, When, Why.
  •  Get your reader to care about your hero right from the beginning.

For an amazing look at opening lines, visit “100 opening lines of novel” http://www.infoplease.com/ipea/A0934311.html/

What is your secret for opening lines?

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2 responses to “Beginnings

  1. Wonderful advice, Ed. I think it was Kurt Vonnegut who said, Make your hero want something, even if it’s only a glass of water. And, of course, the wanting something could just as well be wanting something not to happen as vice versa.

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