Parallels

English seems to like parallels. Try to write with this in mind.

The mama bear, the papa bear and their young cub.
Or
The mama bear, the papa bear, and the baby bear.

I went to the store, to the car wash, and stopped at the hardware store
Or
I went to the store, the car wash, and the hardware store.

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